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Dancing with Russe by ~isabellakay:iconisabellakay:



You think you are so clever
You and your French title
You try to be coy and act so simple
I know there’s more to you than that

Russian ballerinas
With a French title
Never got to perform in Russia
Aliens in a foreign place
Like you
Outsiders in their own homes

You and your if’s
Did you even do this things
Are you too cowardly to perform
Or too ashamed to admit
If – the most non-committal word ever
But you already knew that didn’t you

Written during a time of drastic changes
Is that why you were confused

Why are you lonely
I never know whether I will find you
Silly or depressed
Must depend on the day
©2008-2009 ~isabellakay
:iconisabellakay:

Author's Comments

This is for a Poetic Responses Contest since April is National Poetry Month. If you check out this article you will see there are some ongoing and weekly contests.

This is a response to WCW's Danse Russe .

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:iconroxxihearts:
its BEAUTIFUL! i may not know wat it means but i can tell it really MEANS

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:iconisabellakay:
thank you for the comment and the fave! :hug: i'm glad you liked it :) have a great week!

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"I'm trying to find truth in words, in rhymes, in notes, in all the things I wish I'd wrote" ~The Format's "I'm Ready I Am"

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:iconpaul-cooper:
Nice poem; that's some enjambement and a half. =)
:iconisabellakay:
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it :)

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"I'm trying to find truth in words, in rhymes, in notes, in all the things I wish I'd wrote" ~The Format's "I'm Ready I Am"

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